After reviewing and scoring other AP Language argument essays, identify two important takeaways that you can apply to your own writing. Explain what you learned about claims, evidence, commentary, the “so what?” explanation, or the AP rubric.

 When reviewing other argument essays today in class, there were two things that i can apply to my writing. The way they were using commentary and the claims stood out to me when reading. They had listed down what they had to say and would break it down into detail. I would understand how they would want the readers to visualize what they were saying. I can see how I would use this in my on writing since it can help with what i have to say.

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